rework comments

platformer.js

@@ -1,54 +1,36 @@
-// heavily based on the Quintus platformer example.
+// heavily based/copied from/on the quintus platformer example.
 // vim:tw=120:
 
 window.addEventListener("load",function() {
 
-// Set up an instance of the Quintus engine  and include
-// the Sprites, Scenes, Input and 2D module. The 2D module
-// includes the `TileLayer` class as well as the `2d` componet.
 var Q = window.Q = Quintus({ development: true })
         .include("Sprites, Scenes, Input, 2D, Anim, Touch, UI")
-        // Maximize this game to whatever the size of the browser is
         .setup({ maximize: true })
-        // And turn on default input controls and touch input (for UI)
         .controls().touch()
 
-// ## Player Sprite
-// The very basic player sprite, this is just a normal sprite
-// using the player sprite sheet with default controls added to it.
 Q.Sprite.extend("Player",{
 
-  // the init constructor is called on creation
   init: function(p) {
 
-    // You can call the parent's constructor with this._super(..)
     this._super(p, {
-      sheet: "astronaut",  // Setting a sprite sheet sets sprite width and height
+      sheet: "astronaut",
-      x: 320,           // You can also set additional properties that can
+      x: 320,
-      y: 90             // be overridden on object creation
+      y: 90
-    });
+    });
-
-    // Add in pre-made components to get up and running quickly
-    // The `2d` component adds in default 2d collision detection
-    // and kinetics (velocity, gravity)
-    // The `platformerControls` makes the player controllable by the
-    // default input actions (left, right to move,  up or action to jump)
-    // It also checks to make sure the player is on a horizontal surface before
-    // letting them jump.
-    this.add('2d, platformerControls');
 
-    // Write event handlers to respond hook into behaviors.
+    this.add('2d, platformerControls');
-    // hit.sprite is called everytime the player collides with a sprite
     this.on("hit.sprite",function(collision) {
-
-      // Check the collision, if it's the rocket, you win!
       if(collision.obj.isA("Rocket")) {
-        var rocket = collision.obj;
 
+        // the rocket flies away
+        var rocket = collision.obj;
         rocket.add("tween");
         rocket.animate({ x: 100, y: -500, angle: 360 });
 
+        // the player disappears
         this.destroy();
+
+        // and the invite is displayed
         $("#einladung").show("slow");
       }
     });
@@ -64,18 +46,11 @@ Q.Sprite.extend("Rocket", {
   }
 });
 
-// ## Enemy Sprite
-// Create the Enemy class to add in some baddies
 Q.Sprite.extend("Neingeist",{
   init: function(p) {
     this._super(p, { sheet: 'neingeist', vx: 100 });
-
-    // Enemies use the Bounce AI to change direction
-    // whenver they run into something.
     this.add('2d, aiBounce');
 
-    // Listen for a sprite collision, if it's the player,
-    // end the game unless the enemy is hit on top
     this.on("bump.left,bump.right,bump.bottom",function(collision) {
       if(collision.obj.isA("Player")) {
         Q.stageScene("endGame", 1);
@@ -83,8 +58,6 @@ Q.Sprite.extend("Neingeist",{
       }
     });
 
-    // If the enemy gets hit on the top, destroy it
-    // and give the user a "hop"
     this.on("bump.top",function(collision) {
       if(collision.obj.isA("Player")) {
         this.destroy();
@@ -95,18 +68,11 @@ Q.Sprite.extend("Neingeist",{
 });
 
 // FIXME do not copy
-// ## Enemy Sprite
-// Create the Enemy class to add in some baddies
 Q.Sprite.extend("Starbug",{
   init: function(p) {
     this._super(p, { sheet: 'starbug', vx: 100 });
-
-    // Enemies use the Bounce AI to change direction
-    // whenver they run into something.
     this.add('2d, aiBounce');
 
-    // Listen for a sprite collision, if it's the player,
-    // end the game unless the enemy is hit on top
     this.on("bump.left,bump.right,bump.bottom",function(collision) {
       if(collision.obj.isA("Player")) {
         Q.stageScene("endGame", 1);
@@ -114,8 +80,6 @@ Q.Sprite.extend("Starbug",{
       }
     });
 
-    // If the enemy gets hit on the top, destroy it
-    // and give the user a "hop"
     this.on("bump.top",function(collision) {
       if(collision.obj.isA("Player")) {
         this.destroy();
@@ -126,18 +90,12 @@ Q.Sprite.extend("Starbug",{
 });
 
 // FIXME do not copy
-// ## Enemy Sprite
-// Create the Enemy class to add in some baddies
 Q.Sprite.extend("Martin",{
   init: function(p) {
     this._super(p, { sheet: 'martin', vx: 100 });
 
-    // Enemies use the Bounce AI to change direction
-    // whenver they run into something.
     this.add('2d, aiBounce');
 
-    // Listen for a sprite collision, if it's the player,
-    // end the game unless the enemy is hit on top
     this.on("bump.left,bump.right,bump.bottom",function(collision) {
       if(collision.obj.isA("Player")) {
         Q.stageScene("endGame", 1);
@@ -145,8 +103,6 @@ Q.Sprite.extend("Martin",{
       }
     });
 
-    // If the enemy gets hit on the top, destroy it
-    // and give the user a "hop"
     this.on("bump.top",function(collision) {
       if(collision.obj.isA("Player")) {
         this.destroy();
@@ -156,14 +112,10 @@ Q.Sprite.extend("Martin",{
   }
 });
 
-// ## Level1 scene
-// Create a new scene called level 1
 Q.scene("level1", function(stage) {
 
-  // Add in a repeater for a little parallax action
   stage.insert(new Q.Repeater({ asset: "background.png", speedX: 0.5, speedY: 0.5 }));
 
-  // Add in a tile layer, and make it the collision layer
   stage.collisionLayer(new Q.TileLayer({
                              tileW: 24,
                              tileH: 24,
@@ -171,15 +123,14 @@ Q.scene("level1",function(stage) {
                              sheet:     'tiles' }));
 
 
-  // Create the player and add them to the stage
+  // player
   var player = stage.insert(new Q.Player());
 
-  // Give the stage a moveable viewport and tell it
+  // viewport
-  // to follow the player.
   stage.add("viewport").follow(player);
   stage.viewport.scale = 2;
 
-  // Add in a couple of enemies
+  // enemies
   stage.insert(new Q.Starbug({ x: 600, y: 0 }));
   stage.insert(new Q.Neingeist({ x: 650, y: 0 }));
   stage.insert(new Q.Martin({ x: 550, y: 0 }));
@@ -187,52 +138,27 @@ Q.scene("level1",function(stage) {
   stage.insert(new Q.Rocket({ x: 146, y: 32 }));
 });
 
-// To display a game over / game won popup box,
-// create a endGame scene
 Q.scene('endGame',function(stage) {
   var container = stage.insert(new Q.UI.Container({
     x: Q.width/2, y: Q.height/2, fill: "rgba(0,0,0,0.5)"
   }));
 
-
   var button = container.insert(new Q.UI.Button({ x: 0, y: 0, fill: "#CCCCCC",
                                                   label: "NOCHMAL" }))
-  // When the button is clicked, clear all the stages
+
-  // and restart the game.
   button.on("click",function() {
     Q.clearStages();
     Q.stageScene('level1');
   });
 
-  // Expand the container to visibily fit it's contents
-  // (with a padding)
   container.fit(16);
 });
 
-// ## Asset Loading and Game Launch
-// Q.load can be called at any time to load additional assets
-// assets that are already loaded will be skipped
-// The callback will be triggered when everything is loaded
 Q.load("sprites.png, sprites.json, level.json, tiles.png, background.png", function() {
-  // Sprites sheets can be created manually
   Q.sheet("tiles","tiles.png", { tilew: 24, tileh: 24 });
-
-  // Or from a .json asset that defines sprite locations
   Q.compileSheets("sprites.png","sprites.json");
 
-  // Finally, call stageScene to run the game
   Q.stageScene("level1");
 });
 
-// ## Possible Experimentations:
-//
-// The are lots of things to try out here.
-//
-// 1. Modify level.json to change the level around and add in some more enemies.
-// 2. Add in a second level by creating a level2.json and a level2 scene that gets
-//    loaded after level 1 is complete.
-// 3. Add in a title screen
-// 4. Add in a hud and points for jumping on enemies.
-// 5. Add in a `Repeater` behind the TileLayer to create a paralax scrolling effect.
-
 });